SAMPLE DRAFTS

 NOTE: THE STORY BELOW IS ONLY A SAMPLE, YOU SHOULDN'T USE IT.
 Questions to consider while writing:
How will the characters interact?
What images do I want to accomplish for the viewer?
What will become some trademarks of the series?
How do I end without running out of ideas(see tutorials)
What events do I want to happen in the story?
What effects will the events in the story have on the characters?
 GENRE: FICTION-ACTION AND ADVENTURE!

List of characters:
1. Rant Kyle-wild type of con man.
2. Lieus Vorne -a boy from the beaches of Acortia
3.Reyna Crowulada- Lieus' best friend
4. Witch Haggle-a girl who practices witchcraft
By Method , List:
1. Great Baskin, a spirit of epic proportions reveals to the younger spirits of confetity
that there was another universe before this one and another earth called Merth. ( introduction of main characters).
2. Lieus Vorne in his intention to reach the bottom half of the world(Merth is split in two halves)-Mafia Boss Dorow captures him to enlist him in his attack force, Rant Kyle helps save Lieus from being killed when he disagrees.
3. Reyna Crowulada looking for Lieus recalls their events together and how the loss of his girlfriend,Leana to a vortex in the sea prompted him to run away and travel into the second half of Merth!
4. Meet Witch Haggle,who saved Lieus and Rant from certain death but reveals to be quiet crazy and in bondage to a more dangerous power,Mr. Face!
5.Witch Haggle freed of her master decides to travel with Lieus and Rant to the under half of  Merth but Mafia Boss Dorow hasn't forgotten and is out for certain revenge of his left eye!
6. Captured by Croteck agents-the trio are forced to help them by training and then going undercover to find out what the mafia bosses are exactly up to.
7. Reyna Crowulada interrupts the fight bringing in some hired help-rather her brutal cousins, the Rank-but they turn out with their own purposes of killing the mafia bosses and steal their pirate ancestry treasures.
8. Great Baskin breaks from his tale about these people and goes over the geography of Merth throughout the eyes of Crant and Krieyala -two love strung travelers in a hot air balloon.
9. Lieus Vorne captured by the Rank must help them get the treasure or we will die from his fear of heights.
10. The police are after Lieus and his friends-"the suspects" after Lieus leads an escape plot and stumble straight into a Mall where terrorists are attacking.
11.Lieus and his friends are hailed as heroes for going after and defeating the terrorists but the last remaining Mafia leader, Rudi wants to cause mass destruction with them at the center of it and sends assassins and a female ploy.
12. Lieus and friends travel to the Amuseotorium, a sort of place with virtual games, animals and all sorts of fun things but come across the man who has been trapped in a basement for 25 long years.
They also soon learn their are dire consequences for their actions.
13. Lieus and Ruyel(new female introduced in 1) are forced away from the others in the frozen section and must find a way out of the closed section  and defeat the ice clowns.
14. Lieus learns he is in deep love with Ruyel but  Rant finds out she is not only taking orders from Rudi but is his daughter! Lieus and the gang must stop clone look alikes from den-notating bombs scattered across the city of Pamla via parade float.
15. When Ruyel is captured by Rudi's men to be punished- Lieus goes after her and his friends are forced to follow.
16. After battling the Nice Work girls- Rudi's other daughters with his wife Vora-the others are captured and put in jail but Lieus battles Rudi for Ruyel's life.
17.Lieus must recall his decisions when Witch Haggle is nearly killed saving his from Rudi's gun shot and he kills Rudi.
18. Ruyel thanks Lieus by getting the Gregorians to invite him to an inclusive ball in the under half but a new group-the Siglacs(Glaciers) want the exclusive crystal Rouridan.
19. Lieus captured and attached to a building to be sacrificed to spirit the Siglacs serve, decides he has had enough and challenges the spirit itself.
20. Lieus awakes from his coma and realizes with the spirit said would happen would be forever true- Merth would die and Earth would  form-the Sagers want Lieus' assistance in the under belly.
By Method, New Exciting Concept(s)-Abstract Thinking:
1. Lieus and the Sagers go to enter another universe which is an extremely difficult thing to do and must take on the Counselor(who marks Lieus with the Mark of True and Kind).
2. On Ci-Earth where you can basically fall from a tall building and not die- Lieus and the Sagers  push the Boundaries of life and death here,taking on a being that stole Riane's dreams and the other Sagers' nightmares making it impossible for them to live longer than a week.
3. The Dream Master reasons with Lieus from his dreams that it would be best for the Sagers to die than him take on a woman with dream taking abilities. Lieus fights the Dream Master and ends up with a gift-dream sight.
4. Lieus tired already of being on Ci-Earth daydreams of being with Ruyel again but must get his act together when the gang is attacked leaving the city via train then cruise line boat then emergency boat.
5.  As no human-no living thing can stay in the waters of Ci-Earth long because of high suction via entry (boats actually float way above water), the gang is sucked down to Acortia?
6. Lieus learns that Acortia spans all across existence and learns from his mother and Leana that they got to this section of Acortia by incident and the woman he wants to find to get the Sagers' lives back(dreams back) is long dead!
7. Lieus,his mother and Leana are left by the Sagers when the ghost of Despera Slown commands them to fight but her spell goes wrong and they start running. Lieus discovers a simple easy way to defeat Despera Slown without battling(battling would be pointless).
8.Leana and Lieus relax and celebrate their togetherness while the Sagers catch up on much needed sleep-the dark acortians want to ruin the fun.
9. Lieus discovers that he is the only one that can leave this section of Acortia and open up the force fields to let many Acortians trapped over the ages free but must make it back to his friends on Merth.
10. The DECKO Bosses want to learn more about Merth and want to stop Lieus from getting back to the wall-the connective band of space time continuum that allows its travels to pass into other universes.
11. When Lieus after killing all the Decko Bosses one by one faces a girl in black called Stacy-he is in for the run of his very life and may not come out all attached.
12. Back on Merth, Ruyel,Rant,Reyna and Witch Haggle miss Lieus and go to search for him only to find the Under side of Merth being attached by people from another universe.
13. The self proclaimed Healers after the fight with the Counselor go to rescue  Lieus in his torture with Stacy who is set on making him her husband and pleasure toy only to discover Lieus has been brainwashed for her purposes.
14. Reyna proves the only person to stop Stacy and Lieus when the others are knocked out by sleeping gas and Stacy reveals her true intentions: an army of clone Lieus's to take over Ci-Earth.
15. Witch Haggle is captured by the Magic Order while Lieus and the group are recovering from their encounter with Stacy(who vanished)-Lieus and the group make a desperate rescue attempt in a strange place that is stranger than strange.
16. Lye Eathers,beings common on Ci-Earth want to help Lieus and the Healers find the Manjin-a powerful box that can remove the force fields in Acortia.
17. Great Baskin interrupts to return to the story of the hot air balloon lovers and if they pay an important path in the story itself.
18.  Stuck and Trapped in a haunted house on Ci-Earth,Lieus and the Healers struggle against the Death Stares,where one false look can end you up as dead!
19. The Healers are caught in a battle between the Lye Eathers and the Death Stares for the force field breaker and only Lieus can stop the battle but it comes with a price.
20. Great Baskin himself shows up in some type of form and rises to warn Lieus to not activate the Manjin without defeating the Beast of the Thrist!
By Questions:
LIFE FROM NOW ON?
1.  Lieus,the Healers,Lieus' mother,Leana and the Sagers return to Merth only to find that a war has erupted  between the nations of the above and the underneath! Lieus' mother reveals the origin of Merth and its two worlds.
2.Lieus is split from the others and takes on the mysterious killer of underneath called Disrothen and discovers the very fabric of the world is falling apart.
3. Lieus stuck in an unknown part of the underworld has to rely on his fading dream powers to survive against the Down Trodden Army which is using a massive invention to fade the barriers between the above and the underneath!(unbeknownst-ly breaking the barriers between the universes and their many dimensions).
4. Rant saves Lieus again and Lieus badly injured reveals to his friends and allies that all of existence will fall down if they do not stop the Down Trodden and their vicious machine.
5.  The group trying to go for the control room after the battle with the Down Trodden come across the Existers who reveal that they have taken from the Crodarity (the box where things that are not supposed to exist are)which is why the universe is breaking down on itself.

 HEART BREAK SYMPHONY?
6. Lieus is gone after he sacrifices himself to set the boy Vroge free and Reyna and the new self appointed Yumi(Ruyel) are more willing to search for him even when his own mother thinks he is dead. Reyna, Yumi, Rant and Witch Haggle travel to Auniyaha, a land legended to have the answers to everything.
7. Crant and Krieyala face troubles when their ship is attacked over Auniyaha and meet travelers search for answers dealing with a lost friend. The Beast of  Auniyaha want the travelers to pass a character test or they will die.
8. The Elves of Yonder help Yumi out when the Beasts want her dead for her past actions and the Travelers reach Nacrocropolis -where all their problems will be solved by the Wise,if they can defeat them.
9. Lieus wakes up and discovers that he is in the Crodarity and must take on all the non-existant creatures to survive and make it  back home.
10. Lieus must stop his friends fighting with the Wise but the Wise use his distraction to comatize his friends in a plot to steal their information.

VEIL OF DARKNESS?
11. Through much pain-the Travelers unite together in the Dream World to defeat the Wise who are actually beings called demons.
 12. As the city once know as Nacropolis reverts back to Redstone Town, the Travelers are called by the Great Voda- a very old being who has existed from the start of the Universe and to get to him they must take on his many beasts,the Craylak.
 13. Beast Audinlin captures Reyna to be his wife and the Travelers go to stop the wedding but it will be very arduous to do.
14. Crant and Krieyala are the only ones left after the others are trapped in the crystal of Beast Audinlin and must find a way to defeat Audinlin with Lieus' help.
15. On the path among the Jasmine Road-all the males of the group except Lieus are captivated by the beauty of the ladies there and are turned into their slaves. Lieus and the girls go to save the others.

THE MOUNTAINS SING?
 16.  The Great Voda reveals a great contest coming up in the world-on who can become a reincarnate lasting forever! The Sleek Sanders, begins who seek death want to steal Lieus' death from him(which would cause him to not exist).
17. Lieus pushed to his very boundaries to protect the other travelers from the more than deadly Sleek Sanders is enhanced by the Great Voda- who sacrifices himself to give Lieus the will to defeat them by freezing them in a time spell.
18.Lieus and the travelers set off to find the Rosatah spell of great Gunfurie that would defeat the Sleek Sanders all over Auniyaha who have been awakened by the Traveler's long stay but come across the Secret Veil!
19. Witch Haggle not allowed in the Secret Veil hideout notices that the Secret Veil are not friendly as they appear and only want her friend's soul for some type of debt and goes to save them all before its too late.
20. Lieus, Aidamari(Witch Haggle after she is set free from her curse) and the Travelers are running out of  time in defeating the Sleek Sanders who are causing terror among the land.

By Imagery and Pictures:
1. Aidamari decides to leave the gang to go revisit her home world and discovers a great terror there!
2. Leana is glad Lieus is back from his adventurers but Lieus doesn't know how to break it that he doesn't like her anymore but a distress call from Aidamari is a chance to get away and think-or not!
3. Lieus and Aidamari take on the Game Master who has turned almost all the Magicians into stone and only Reeve and his crew remain(they weren't interested in the game).
4. The Game Master, Lieus, Aidamari, Reeve and his crew face angry stone magicians when Aidamari accidentally changes the curse on the magicians.
5. Rudi's daughters return to kill Yumi but their plan is quickly ruined when Yumi is snatched from Merth to become a participant in the Dragon's Run of Existence where few are expected to survive in order to become reincarnates.
6. Reyna and Rant try to avoid begin caught by the Dragon's Run of Existence and come across a gang of children promising they can protect them from the run and they easily take down a legion of dragon warriors.
7. Lieus leaves for Merth but he is captured by the Dragon's Run of Existence after the Great Voda appears and tells him what has happened to Yumi.
8. The Great Baskin continues his story of the Dragon's Run of Existence through the eyes of Dragon,who is over it.
9.Lieus struggles to find the others when everyone is let out to fight against the Brozen dragons.
10. Lieus and the Healers go to find Leana when she is added to the Dragon's Run of Existence and must take on the 17 Pride Elemard Neputian Dragons-the ones that will end dragon run.
11.Lieus and the Healers go to take down the last remaining seven dragons but one belongs to Leana!
12.Lieus and the Healers battle against Dragon to free Leana of the role of a mass killer-Death's Bride.
13. The Spirit of the Phoenix  is born through Lieus and the Healers and with it they go to save the remaining people and creatures from the other 49 deadly dragons.
14. The Great Baskin cuts off this story after the victory of the Healers over Dragon's Run of Existence and explains why he is telling the story in the first place.
15. The Life and Death of Lieus after the Dragon's Run of Existence.
16. The Life and Death of Leana after the Dragon's Run of Existence.
17. The Life and Death of Yumi after the Dragon's Run of Existence.
18. Nextly-the lives and deaths of Rant and others after the Dragon's Run of Existence.
19. The 1st reincarnations of the Healers.
20. The Great Baskin concludes that the Healer did and do so much for the Universe
but now they face a great danger.

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